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He played hard this month:                                      She played well this month:
Mortgages prefixed sales                                         Chlorophyll quotas left in the wake
and rows of steadfast hotels,                                    of cushioned lovers and tickling tiny noses
plastic monuments saluting a gaudy cannon               A row of gently dandling milk
flashing jail-cell smirks                                            warmed by the notion of a golden god
as his firing squad gained two more guns.                 as they dawdled from nap to nap.

They scratched his name into a plaque,                     Until, with ill-defined predicates,
affixing an aging idealisation                                     leather-skinned demons invaded their earth-laden homes
of a hobo (with glasses)                                           and severed them with secateur consequents.
and wisely (for hobos with glasses)                           Herded, the survivors sighed
awarded him a potted plant,                                     and bound by ochre ceramics
trampled by sunflower day-dreams.                          forgot their sunflower memories.


                                [The real estate agent // sunflower flux
                                is a farce.]


"A stunning display of material gradience",                From pine to wax to oak to clay to her,
heaved onto oak                                                     some silent general part of an abstract whole,
and forgotten:                                                         bowing - no, wilting - to desk lamp radiosity
paper-weight in the corner,                                      heavy with dust and laced with despair.
Post-It Note corkboard, pencil holder                        Fed nutrients through caffeine dreg drips,
harbouring sugar-fix detritus;                                   she leapt as glimmers disobeyed drawn verticals,
a conical, glazed generality.                                     blinded by a conical cataract.

Ignorant of the floral occupation,                              Yet growing still.
he pittered and pattered,                                         A genetically embittered Darwinist fuck-up
and pondered why                                                  ploughing fallow survivalism strips,
his desktop was always so full?                                 ignored by a serf with a degree.
His filing cabinets held yellow B27s,                          She spat progeny, contemptuously advancing
rather than disproportionate grey?                            towards ceilings of disproportionate grey.


                                [Brown begets brown so her sunflower stems
                                faded to shades of chrysoberyl.]


He began to tip as he stumbled                                Petallions of sunflower suffragettes
from platform A, halfway to platform Z.                    waging hay-fever hijackings,
Just over, he saw red.                                             accompanied by converted sympathies.
Rigid boundaries lurked on the periphery.                 Chrysanthemum generals bless you,
Cowering from life's technicolour paroxysm,             extend stems and pummel
he lurked in outlines,                                               black flashing buttons of biological warfare.
scattering when they didn't spell SPForever.              And Her, fractalling outwards and upwards.

Shrinking, he slinked in whimpers and sobs,              And Her, exerting noxious pollen forces,
painting transparent fingerprints,                              commandeering tin foil caps and vents,
tearing at unscratched woodwork,                            bursting along pop-riveted screams.
dangling from the plaque.                                        And Her, smacking into support pylons,
Nobody notices boot-level grilles, so when                 forcing cracked concrete
pop-rivets flew, he melted: a burbling,                      and thrust, shoving into
glutinous glob, absorbed and bound for the sky.        the sunlight cavalcades of memory.


                                [Tessellated brickwork settled,
                                glinting behind blotting rainbows.
                                She guzzled, entwined by a
                                copper conical lattice.

                                And she sighed.]
©2004-2009 ~psychodrive
:iconpsychodrive:

Author's Comments

Have you ever heard a sunflower sigh?
The despondent whisper of pollen, drifting dejectedly as dew settles in its place.
A more sallow breath would cause the wind itself to mist over.

Acknowledgements:
=La-Serpentia
~breathheld

Edit: Fucking dAv5. I've scrapped the preview with the correct formatting at [link] .

Daily Deviation

Given 2004-10-09

Sunflower Flux by *psychodrive should be in a textbook. Bring it in to class and see how it fairs amongst your illiterate peers. This poem is a revelation of words and storytelling. (Suggested by `darkcrescendo and Featured by `Astrophel)

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:iconla-serpentia:
oh yay, you already know my thoughts on this. A truly pleasurable piece, brilliantly written and executed *tips hat*.

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Days of wine and roses, days of wine and roses
All the artists flew in and all the arseholes flew out in '72



<`MinorKey> and don't drink so much that you remember having fun...
:iconpsychodrive:
:smooch: It was my pleasure.

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<youthculture>AAHJ THERESN A FLY ON MY NONUEIET
<youthculture>MONITERN AAAA
:iconlordofsenses:
to confuisng to read right now, i'm really tired..

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We are the future, and we are going to fucking kill you!
-Shan Crahan
:iconpsychodrive:
no probs mate. it IS a little chunky. :) look forward to your comments

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<youthculture>AAHJ THERESN A FLY ON MY NONUEIET
<youthculture>MONITERN AAAA
:iconbastardepiphany:
Wordwrap is not my friend! As I've suggested to shackell - jpeg preview with the correct formatting.
:iconpsychodrive:
you make a good point. i'll wrk on that jpeg for ya.

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<youthculture>AAHJ THERESN A FLY ON MY NONUEIET
<youthculture>MONITERN AAAA
:iconpsychodrive:
tell the shack shack that since dA lets you use PNG files, he'd be better off using a web-optimised PNG. Cut the file size from 128k to 28k

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<youthculture>AAHJ THERESN A FLY ON MY NONUEIET
<youthculture>MONITERN AAAA
:iconbastardepiphany:
PNG. eek. (Purest)

I was thinking of explaining '2 bit non alias text gif' but shackell's simple folk. :)
:iconspin0spin0suga:
OK~ letting you know I *SEE* this... and plan on reading (and rereading) this! But tired... and hard to understand.. and words not making sense. Yes. Ok, LETTING YOU KNOW! *backs away*

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:iconbastardepiphany:
So many ways to read it. I'm embroiled in hexadecimal
charts and I suddenly realise: "You slow git Sid. The geek's buggier than an entomology class." Then there's crossways, downways, line by line, paragraph, intermissions. *sign*. This must have taken an age. It makes me like feel drawing.

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